I wanted the author to show how Totori fell for Asahina, a POV of Totori or something like...

fothermucker January 17, 2016 12:44 am

I wanted the author to show how Totori fell for Asahina, a POV of Totori or something like that, just to make the story a little juicier, it's not entirely impossible for this kind of relationship to happen ryt? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

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    misaki January 17, 2016 1:00 am

    Ahhhh I was thinking the same, just that I actually wanted asahina's POV lol would've made the story more interesting! Right now I am not really sure what the author is really trying to tell.
    Well the smexy parts are good so I am satisfied on that part(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    Anonymous August 28, 2017 2:43 am

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    Anonymous August 28, 2017 2:48 am

    I honestly love this story, and I can believe this relationship can happen, I love the way the both fell for each other lol and totori is so cute he fits so perfectly with asahina. You know trouble some boy with an honor student it's my peeks you know lol I read this over and over again just cause I wished he continues the story. I wished they also kissed more. I think he should have put both of their pov on here it would have been nice to see them say that there actually in love with each other and I feel it in my heart that they do love each other. I don't like the other story tho, they just should have continued totori and asahina