Hmm.

elixirious March 18, 2021 3:57 pm

This was a wild ride.. it has its moments. Some were good and some were bad. It’s just so convoluted without needing to be. Like it tries to be complicated but failed at explaining why it’s so complicated. Like, suddenly the whole city was a lab and it’s not explored much, Jimmy being the black wolf had little plot, it was just a bombastic factor to add in the end with no hints in the beginning nor any reasoning to why it’s so special.

They should have just focused on one aspect instead.

So in the end, rare breeds are given the choice to be humans instead of trying to minimize discrimination and normalize humans coexisting with other species. Hmm.

Also, the pill wasn’t even needed. Didn’t earlier in the series, mason said that purebreds have the ability to get pregnant, which was why he wanted to pursue Jimmy in the first place? Are we just throwing that out? I thought that he wanted to have more purebreds and werewolves, what’s with the sudden “I wanted you to be safe, Henry.”?

Wow, the more I analyze it, the more faults I see. Lmao, I’m just gonna chill now. This was a fun read at first but they should have really fleshed out more details and, hmm.

I’ll just give this a 4.0 / 5.0 since I love Jimmy lol.

Responses
    Ankles_available April 26, 2021 6:11 pm

    That's whyt I thought... Something was missing but what...5 star for plot and storyline the author really gave us emotions great enough.. But yeah one aspect thing getting it