Seeing all the happy satisfied comments, I’m gonna get downvoted to hell but does anyone...

donaa April 28, 2021 2:04 am

Seeing all the happy satisfied comments, I’m gonna get downvoted to hell but does anyone else felt that this story was kinda.. Half assed? Or put more nicely, too fast paced. We get to find out that the seme had a “love at first sight” but how? Are you telling me he literally met a guy on the streets and within minutes decide to punch him in the gut and take him home? The author really couldn’t be bothered here.

What drew me to this story is the summary. A yakuza and male prostitute driven to sex industry due to crippling debt. My god a what a perfect dark psychological story.
I was not prepared to be hit in the face with this fluff. It almost feels like a parody of all “seriously yakuza BL’s. Which is also interesting! But the author clearly put more effort into sex scenes than then the plot.
Again it’s too fast paced! The uke is saved before I even get to blink.
They both find each other when they get kidnapped faster than the speed of light ( ̄∇ ̄")

Responses
    donaa April 28, 2021 2:06 am

    Though I must say I really loved ukes one liners. They were really funny.

    Anne April 29, 2021 5:49 am

    it definitely is but most bls are with the constraints they have in a volume and the author def does a good job in the scenes they focus on lol

    Mahk971 April 30, 2021 9:26 pm

    Thanks, you summarized exactly my thoughts. Yeah it was cute, fluffy and all but sloppy and cliché, especially for a yakuza story. If you want to read a similar but good yakuza / prostitute trope read this one, I it yesterday and it was such a great story
    http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/itou_san_kuraka_sui/

    donaa May 1, 2021 12:05 am
    Thanks, you summarized exactly my thoughts. Yeah it was cute, fluffy and all but sloppy and cliché, especially for a yakuza story. If you want to read a similar but good yakuza / prostitute trope read this one... Mahk971

    That one was amazing! There was a lot of bitterness but the sweetness makes up for it at the end (⌒▽⌒) I jumped into this one thinking it’s itou-san nr 2 but boy felt like I got marshmallows shoved down my throat

    Mahk971 May 1, 2021 6:09 am
    That one was amazing! There was a lot of bitterness but the sweetness makes up for it at the end (⌒▽⌒) I jumped into this one thinking it’s itou-san nr 2 but boy felt like I got marshmallows shoved down... donaa

    Yeah Itou-San was an incredible story with so much emotions / feelings and love between the two MCs. It was dark and tragic but also beautiful.
    This one is a pale and cheesy copy of Itou San.
    Well, I’m gonna look for another yakuza / prostitute story.

    BROMYMOMMA May 5, 2021 3:08 pm

    Honestly I agree with you but I really love this story because it’s low-key like a breather from other mafia stories etc fun to read yk

    BROMYMOMMA May 5, 2021 3:09 pm
    Thanks, you summarized exactly my thoughts. Yeah it was cute, fluffy and all but sloppy and cliché, especially for a yakuza story. If you want to read a similar but good yakuza / prostitute trope read this one... Mahk971

    Yessss that manga is so good