How did you not use a single comma or period in your run on sentence? That was tough to read.
Two reasons I am dyslexic I legitimately cannot write properly like it all I’m using text to speech are usually use that because there is a extremely high chance that my sentences will make even less sense like the words in general will be wrong
Yeah the potential for this story is decreasing every chapter
MC is inconsistent as fuck and It’s only been two weeks after everything occurred ??!!
That sounds fake as hell wtf
Also I love how MC is brown skinned too that’s why I started reading this in the first place .... did MC’s skin tone come from the curse or genetics tho? I don’t think it matters that no one is commenting on her skin Bc i like it that way anyways. It they started including racist shit for drama I would have to drop this :/
The racist thing I haven’t seen it because it’s not about the skin it’s about them being in a stronger than usual if you’re talking about that woman yes or the demon thing yeah that’s racist but the skintone know she’s always been that color because they showed her when before she had the curse when she was a child apparently her mom just comes from a different place and everybody thought she was really really pretty but so at least I do not judge mental about that just about legitimately different creatures
Oh my God but yeah the potential for the story slowly decreases one by one some story so there’s two ways it can usually go it’s not usually bad it’s either Goes into somewhere unexpected but not bad and so you’re curious because it makes no sense of what you thought it would be or it goes the way you thought but it makes it more interesting or more in depth like it’s supposed to be this shits just all over the place and doesn’t feel like it has a fucking base plot but I will keep reading just in case before now but if in 20 more chapters this shits not going good I’m out
So I’m losing interest because of multiple reasons first of all there was something more going on with her ex fiancé in the whole shebang like what was going on with that like I’m curious and the female is giving me completely inconsistent character vibes meaning that whole whole character bases in the way that she acts is so erratic that you can’t really pinpoint it including the ML it’s giving me more testy puppy dog lives like that’s my bitch that’s my Besty more like my best friend lives with her and it’s giving me more than her in her direction short time with the crush infatuation that’s what it’s giving me I see no real connection the hook that used to be there’s no longer there there was just a tiny hook and like it wasn’t even consistent the art is actually pretty fucking mediocre so when everything is mediocre it’s not the first like first of all the art is inconsistent and it looks choppy in some panels and even some whole ass chapters they look like people from episode and it weirds me out there hairline is what the hell is going on the faces are usually with more dumb than anything else I was mostly reading thisBecause you’re finally giving me a dark woman a dark mean lead female at that which is rare and she’s not even a necessity why is black in my opinion she’s just a shade darker and she still consider beautiful as fuck so there is some mystery there but it’s not that fascinating there’s only one thing that I’m curious about so far and it’s what was actually going on with her exion say I’m also like him better just because he looks more complicated