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I'm not trying to defend this story in any way, I think it's bad also, but the whole no love in this was intended. I believe that this was just portraying lust so that's why the characters had no true connection.
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That was bad, I barely felt any love in this and me feel empty! I feel like he had his memories at the end because of the way he looked at him walking away. The only thing I liked about this was the art and the smexiness in it. It could have been a lot better!