"alpha's bride" more like "alpha's minor bride" lmao This is kinda ridiculous to me, Idk ...

tongtong December 29, 2023 8:38 pm

"alpha's bride" more like "alpha's minor bride" lmao

This is kinda ridiculous to me, Idk if it's the lack of the proper translation ( still, thanks for the effort) or the improper placement of some of the chapters or it's just because the writing is shitty lol

Ok, I'm not trying be moral police here, I can differentiate fiction and reality, I don't judge other people on what they are reading (sometimes I do thou ) u do u. BUT the thing is EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENED IN THIS MANGA ARE SO FAST AND kinda NOT MAKING ANY SENSE. IDK but it was wasted potential, the art is so good, the character design are pretty I actually love it yet I don't really feel anything about them. I didn't feel the drama, the butterfly in my stomach, I can't even sympathize with the main character and his struggle of sudden transition from being an alpha to omega.

I can actually by pass the main character being a teenager (but it would be nice if the ml is not a fucking adult lmao) if the author made more space for his teenage life and his struggle as a teenager who discovered that he's not the real son of his parents, he's not an alpha, and they're having a financial burden, I actually like the storyline, them being a fated soul, the ml finding his soulmates, the mc discovering that he's not an alpha but omega, the ml's alpha supremacists parents, mc's real family, rich people's problem, the heir issue. It's actually a decent or good formula for a good drama, angsty bl, teenage self discovery but too bad the writing is kinda meh

Responses
    Nonon December 30, 2023 10:01 am

    Gonna have to agree like?? Why are they in love? What had even occurred for them to be in love? Idk it so wonky. There's no real feeling, just pretty art and a kid that looks like a kid

    Nonon December 30, 2023 10:03 am
    Gonna have to agree like?? Why are they in love? What had even occurred for them to be in love? Idk it so wonky. There's no real feeling, just pretty art and a kid that looks like a kid Nonon

    Like if Riku looked a little older or more mature, I'd just age him up in my head and lik whatever. But he actually looks so young

    tongtong December 30, 2023 4:51 pm
    Gonna have to agree like?? Why are they in love? What had even occurred for them to be in love? Idk it so wonky. There's no real feeling, just pretty art and a kid that looks like a kid Nonon

    FR!!! AND THE PARENT (RIKU'S PARENTS) CONFRONTATION SCENE WITH ML WHAT THE FCK WAS THAT???? like why??? Why did the author wrote those scene like that?? It seems like they just want to rush the cohabitation of mc and ml and even when they live together nothing much really happened just unseasoned sex

    tongtong December 30, 2023 4:52 pm
    Like if Riku looked a little older or more mature, I'd just age him up in my head and lik whatever. But he actually looks so young Nonon

    I actually don't mind his appearance but I don't opposed you with this

    tongtong December 30, 2023 4:54 pm
    I actually don't mind his appearance but I don't opposed you with this tongtong

    Don't get me wrong here cuz I myself look like a kid happened to me 2 times when a doctor though I was fcking 12 years old when I'm actually in my early 20's