I bet if this story went accordingly to ur liking, u will find it boring because of how easy her plans went. Likeee, I'm glad the miscommunication isn't that bad. I've suffered enough miscommunication in novels that would last for so long that it's unnecessary. I'm surprised that we are at chapter 55, and the ml already knows that the mc isn't bad, fell for her(well, he's still in denial which is understandable cuz of his trauma), knows her suffering and didn't dilly dally and just went straight to her house to take her. I agree, granted he could've asked his men to send a message to the mc that his busy.. but that would mean the risk of revealing that he is Hertz. Why couldn't Hertz just go to the mc?? Isn't he just a proxy? And the mc is already aware that he is not present at all times. Like give the dude a break, his basically taking his time out to meet the mc despite his busy schedule. Did u forgot the chapter where he had under eye bags? Like my guy didn't sleep for days, and still went to her.
All in all, if what you've wished went accordingly to the story, we would have a plain ass story that gets quickly resolve. I'm actually glad that this story didn't go to what you wanted or else it would've been rlly boring, and the misunderstanding of the ml towards the fl was easily cleared. Now I'm just eagerly waiting for the reveal of the ml identity to the mc, tho for some reason, this story has enough misunderstanding that wouldn't make me lose my hair out of frustration. It's just enough. I'm just hoping for the mc and ml to heal from their trauma.
100% agreed! The overconfidence! And the author deciding to use stupid plot to increase the tension. Like why couldn't she do it without imposing stupidity on the mc.
Aside from villains. The family, the emperor, the corrupt people.
Tbh it's annoying. FL is overconfident with herself, she already got two days before the raffle, which mean, she should have deal the diamond mine certificate in allotted time, but no. She was like oopss I forgot to screw luther over, I should go back to the duchy ALONE, because I believe Luther is in imperial palace now.
Why didn't she used that 2 days to steal the diamond mine documents (or get Sir Grik to do it, he is skilled). Then after the raffle they all can just go together.
Now she was so scared to be divorced she rather tracked down the messenger??? And she let the maid came with her.
Why not, send maid over to her husband castle to make a report, that she and the knight went to the forest, and when she and grik go to the forest maybe her husband can meet her some way in the middle. It's so complicated because she kept changing her minds.
Husband also frustrating. He finished his job early, he said he will bring his wife back with him AFTER trial. But naaahh, I m going to be gone for a while, without telling her anything. You know, he can tell FL things like, the duke will pick you up in few days please wait. If he said that, maybe FL won't be so rush running to the forest and just headed to the castle. But ML is gone without giving reason or prior notice to FL that her husband will come to pick her up. For what exactly was he gone??? Didn't he put Allnighter for 2 days to complete 48 documents, before trial so he can meet with her?
Both of them wasting so much time by thinking, "ah yes I could do this first, oh that plan? Yeah we can delay it, after I do something I suddenly think just now". It works if they don't have problems tho. But that's not their case, does it. FL has to runaway faster, while all ML thinking is "I have to make a grand entrance to whisk my wife away". That's what you got by lying. I get that he lied the first time because he suspicious of her. But it was annoying he kept his lie all the time when he knew enough that she wasn't even part of the family and expect everything will go smoothly.
Why miscommunication is favorite theme in novel?
1. Don't lie
2. Don't waste time
3. Don't let your guard down