Not really. The author is a good writer, the problem is their pacing. They have zero clue how pacing works. You can't drop huge bombs in a story randomly, you have to slowly ease it in. The author just randomly made the plot twist without actually slowly immersing the reader into it
Yes it is really yall just want instant gratification and that is not this. Literally nothing has changed except people are starting to show their hand now that we are getting to nitty gritty. I feel like the pacing is fine because to be honest it was up in the air if this story was even going to continue. To be honest if you don’t like it don’t read it it’s as simple as that. We won’t agree on this
I never said I didn't like it. I clearly said the author is an amazing writer. I gave constructive criticism, and you're taking it to heart? Like I said, the author should have slowly revealed who Panther was by placing Easter eggs all around, not just flat out saying who he was with no context for the MC.
Lmao the plot is the same plot from the beginning ! Anyway finally it’s getting to the juicy parts!