The story goes good then… sex… the story is back… then sex…. He’s injured… sex...

Ellio September 29, 2025 11:23 pm

The story goes good then… sex… the story is back… then sex…. He’s injured… sex…. Development in the relationship but not a relationship at all yet… sex. WHY IS THERE SO MUCH?? I know it’s a Yaoi but you can have a good fair share of story and sex. Also the relationship feels a bit forced? I don’t know, it feels off. There’s not a lot to give off of it at all just that they care for one another because “he’s a good Soul” #-.-)

But hopefully this progresses more throughly… I have hope… ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ

P.S. Yes I know it’s yaoi and that is inevitable. What I mean by this post was that overall the build up of the relationship is very weird, and which makes the sex scenes feel quite puzzling. Of course it isn’t a lot of sex I was just being dramatic! Drugging him and using ‘chains/handcuffs(?)’ is pushing the bar for romantic. So when I saw it, I just think, oh!, and then I express it so if any others read they could see the review I gave of it. I stick to more story build up rather than straight sex. So my opinion is invalid of all ways! I just wanted to express my opinion! Thank you (≧∀≦)

Responses
    yaoi_loverxlover September 29, 2025 7:50 am

    “The greed, it sickens me” (≧∀≦)

    DearMsPotatoHead September 29, 2025 8:08 am

    This has lesser s3x scenes than most tho

    I can´t choice September 29, 2025 2:22 pm

    Bro, you`ve not seen much then! there´s stories with basically nothing but "fwop fwop" each freakin ch! now this is mild on the s*x scenes I´d say

    Ellio September 29, 2025 11:12 pm
    Bro, you`ve not seen much then! there´s stories with basically nothing but "fwop fwop" each freakin ch! now this is mild on the s*x scenes I´d say I can´t choice

    I know such exists it just feels very weird with how they were laid out is what I mean! Like when he chained him to get answers but still forgave him is very.. something! But that’s just my opinion (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    Ellio September 29, 2025 11:14 pm
    This has lesser s3x scenes than most tho DearMsPotatoHead

    Yes I know! I just meant it felt weird to read from the way it was set out ( ̄∇ ̄") but of course that’s how yaoi/BL are most of the time so I’ll deal with it, I just personally would like lore is all I meant with me comment!

    zazu September 30, 2025 12:41 pm

    i guess u could say their relationship is…off track

    Itzz_A_Trap September 30, 2025 12:58 pm
    i guess u could say their relationship is…off track zazu

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    I can´t choice September 30, 2025 3:11 pm
    I know such exists it just feels very weird with how they were laid out is what I mean! Like when he chained him to get answers but still forgave him is very.. something! But that’s just my opinion (づ ̄ ³... Ellio

    I understand what you mean, I didn´t even remember the handcuff scene.. but yeah, yaoi logic doesn´t always logic very much

    Btw thought your pp was Tata first

    zazu September 30, 2025 4:47 pm
    Leave Itzz_A_Trap

    how mean :(

    Itzz_A_Trap October 1, 2025 4:57 am
    how mean :( zazu

    Womp womp #-.-)

    zazu October 1, 2025 7:11 am
    Womp womp #-.-) Itzz_A_Trap

    oh who is youu

    Itzz_A_Trap October 1, 2025 1:41 pm
    oh who is youu zazu