Silly writing, silly plot.

Tonikaku October 14, 2025 9:11 am

Don't know what kinda elite agent acts as hapless, dumb, clumsy and clueless as this annoying uke. If the writer is trying to impress upon the reader that this is believable characterization, well that didn't work. Dropped.

Responses
    Donewithyoshit October 15, 2025 8:39 pm

    It is meant to be silly, trust

    Tonikaku October 15, 2025 8:56 pm
    It is meant to be silly, trust Donewithyoshit

    You mean because it's campy comedy? Even for campy, the characters need to be believable, which can only happen when written properly. For eg, Punch Drunk Love.

    Donewithyoshit October 15, 2025 9:01 pm
    You mean because it's campy comedy? Even for campy, the characters need to be believable, which can only happen when written properly. For eg, Punch Drunk Love. Tonikaku

    Yuh

    Tonikaku October 15, 2025 9:10 pm

    Hah I like how succinct you are

    Donewithyoshit October 15, 2025 9:17 pm
    Hah I like how succinct you are Tonikaku

    I appreciate your honesty with the story, de plot holes. I think it evens out at the end, but that's also my enjoyment of how they are free to be as stupid, free, and domestic as they want at the end

    Donewithyoshit October 15, 2025 9:17 pm

    And if you haven't read How to Define Popularity I recommend it

    Tonikaku October 15, 2025 9:31 pm
    And if you haven't read How to Define Popularity I recommend it Donewithyoshit

    Nice, thanks!