Storywise, the author let go of the most fertile part of uke's and seme's relationship, the many months where one trained the other everyday. They did not treat the subject matter sincerely or believably. That was where all the drama was, the dynamic and character development, the type of give and take where their relationship would have matured and they wouldn't act like the same people they were at the beginning. Four or five months working out together every single day, spending significant time with each other, and their dynamic is the same at the end of it, where are all those many months of them getting to know each other? The MC is the same shallow dude and the ML is the same insecure dude they were at the beginning. not enjoying this. Dropping.
Storywise, the author let go of the most fertile part of uke's and seme's relationship, the many months where one trained the other everyday. They did not treat the subject matter sincerely or believably. That was where all the drama was, the dynamic and character development, the type of give and take where their relationship would have matured and they wouldn't act like the same people they were at the beginning. Four or five months working out together every single day, spending significant time with each other, and their dynamic is the same at the end of it, where are all those many months of them getting to know each other? The MC is the same shallow dude and the ML is the same insecure dude they were at the beginning. not enjoying this. Dropping.