Sura's whole situation was interesting and it felt like there was room for her to grow and change as a character. there was a lot i thought was interesting with this story that i was excited to read like yato's story, the princes and the drama in the family, etc. but most of it feels like it wasnt used to its full potential.
a lot of the story feels stronger in the beginning and then the last act is happening and youre left wondering whats going on. it feels rushed and the things that were being built up seem cut early. the relationship between the FL qnd the two ML seem to revert and get cut off from developing randomly. Yato comes in and they run off together after the other guy blows up on Sura. I thought after all this devlopment between the two that this would be an important moment for them. they would finally recognize what they need to change and what they need to do. but no sura whisks herself away and thats really it. also thats her Father's body???? tf
Sura's whole situation was interesting and it felt like there was room for her to grow and change as a character. there was a lot i thought was interesting with this story that i was excited to read like yato's story, the princes and the drama in the family, etc. but most of it feels like it wasnt used to its full potential.
a lot of the story feels stronger in the beginning and then the last act is happening and youre left wondering whats going on. it feels rushed and the things that were being built up seem cut early. the relationship between the FL qnd the two ML seem to revert and get cut off from developing randomly. Yato comes in and they run off together after the other guy blows up on Sura. I thought after all this devlopment between the two that this would be an important moment for them. they would finally recognize what they need to change and what they need to do. but no sura whisks herself away and thats really it. also thats her Father's body???? tf