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ok shut up this was unneeded
You must got a lot of time on your hands to go through comments and see which ones aren’t needed. Thank you for reviewing mine
Me when a story expands on its plot
Exactly. Imma need a fuckin Brady Bunch intro in the beginning know who the fuck these people are. I’ve been focusing my friend and his relationships.
The plot is so bad like did we know the sister-in-law before? Why do we care about her? News flash, we don’t. I don’t give a fuck about his family. I don’t give a fuck about this dude or his little drug empire or whatever he’s talking about in the car because I don’t know what he’s talking about in the car. And oh my God if they waste chapters on his backstory…The only thing I give a fuck about is how my friends still walking around after all of that? And where is that tan brat at with an apology? We need to sit down and talk.