Just to point shot stupid stuff you typing sounds: 1) why doesn't he dress BLA BLA? He is cat 90% of the story... What clothes are you yapping about? 2) Dog MC was fighter dog that was surviving in gambling Business and his guy just cared for this family (glooming them and trying to get money) Are that dense to see the difference? 3) acting his age? He is barely 21 IMO a child and again going back to point 2 HE IS A FIGHTING DOG BREED he is small black cat. Before typing out long stupid stuff maybe read actual book maybe get some thoughts Behide whatever you typing out. No flame and with all due respect (I don't have for you)
Exactly. While he may not be physically a fighter dog, mentally he was. Take into account the environment puppers grew up in. Not only was his dad a fighter dog, he also was taken in by a gangster pack of fighter dogs and was treated as one. That's what he believed in, he belonged in that pack and that he was one of them.That's what shaped his character. Also, both of these characters' behaviors are highly influenced by the type of animal they are.
Even if i take it into account it's still 20 btw and not a teen. Also i was making a point that he should act like his age. Not like an old person. He usually acts like a kid and not even a teen. Which feels weird as it's very much gonna turn into smut very soon. I wouldn't mind it if it was shounen ai. It's just something that made me uncomfortable so i pointed it out.
not you getting fried in the comments LMAO I totally get u mannn sure he could be influenced by his cat traits and immature and naive but the author could've made him all that without appearing too child like. I really loved the first story's dynamics and mc so I'm kind of disappointed by how "weak" this one is. I can't really sense their chemistry and their dynamic is more like father-child
Yes, thank you. Finally someone understands what i meant. I was a big fan of the author's previous story. Kinda disappointed how weak and one dimensional the cats personality is in this one. Even tho cats are supposed to have a strong personality than dogs tho i wouldn't have actually mind if he was at least somewhat well written.
I see what you mean, the cat's personality in this one doesn't make him stand out/feel as well rounded like it did the other story. The other story explored a character having a tough exterior with a soft/vulnerable inner feelings. With this one, you almost want a sense of inner toughness and resilience to balance how soft the bottom's first impression is. Maybe some more aloofness would have been acceptable since he is a cat.
Comparing a Canine with feline!!!!!! As a mom of 11 babies, I feel offence, No hate to dogs but how can you even make that comparison (╯°Д °)╯╧╧. Cats are natural Tsundere with selective affection which is delivered well by author. You said he dress up like elementary school kid!!??? Bro since when did normal shirt, shorts or hoodie become limited to kids section???¯(°_o)/¯. If you say he looks like kid, there I can't say anything because It's a criticism toward an art style and as someone who can't even draw a proportionate circle without any support, His body is drawn as adult enough for me to not talk about art unlike u

Sorry but anyone else finds the cats personality really annoying? A grown ass man acting and dressing up like an elementary school kid is really not cute. Just think about "don't mess with the puppy", the guy bottoming was small and poor too but at least he used to act like his age. If these two end up fucking it'll just be weird af bc of how much the cat resembles a kid (that's a grown ass man mind you). It's just his character and personality is really rubbing me off.