The story was unique but execution is so poor, it's hard to read. Does it get better?( ̄へ ̄) * I don’t understand why they need to be sexual in the first place. It was supposed to be a symbol of their powerplay but the timing when they initiate it feels wrong * The whole "I want to control you" bs seems so out of place. It was a genuinely good idea, but it could be written better * Either focus on their relationship or on park. The balance seems way off
I would've dropped at this point if it was any other manga but I love the plot :(
The story was unique but execution is so poor, it's hard to read. Does it get better?( ̄へ ̄)
* I don’t understand why they need to be sexual in the first place. It was supposed to be a symbol of their powerplay but the timing when they initiate it feels wrong
* The whole "I want to control you" bs seems so out of place. It was a genuinely good idea, but it could be written better
* Either focus on their relationship or on park. The balance seems way off
I would've dropped at this point if it was any other manga but I love the plot :(