All three are so cute! They all need to be longer! The first one is very cute and fulfilli...

Anonymous November 9, 2017 1:28 pm

All three are so cute! They all need to be longer! The first one is very cute and fulfilling, but I need more explanations about their powers, and more details after they got together, jeez! ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ Where's the lovey-dovey relationship of requited love?
The second one... definitely needs some more explanation. Was that the rabbit? Was that the owner? Was that the rabbit channeling the owner? How did he even know him? Why was everyone so casual about the rabbit being a hot young man? Whuh? It was cute if you don't mind not reading too much into it!
The third one could definitely be an entire series in and of itself! We all know what his past self wanted to tell him, right? Say yes... or something? It was cool, so it left me wanting more! Fantasy-Yaoi with a plot is always a fun read. There's so much more that could be done with this story!
In any case, I enjoyed myself reading this.

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