This is an interesting story but the flow of it is very difficult for me to grasp. With th...

Sachiko July 13, 2018 7:16 pm

This is an interesting story but the flow of it is very difficult for me to grasp. With the way I comprehend things it comes off as very choppy. I will say I don't like the sister or mother. Leaving a sanatorium is running away, especially when you were sent there for something that's not a mental illness? Wow.

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    Sachiko July 13, 2018 8:03 pm

    I know in Asia it might not be readily accepted but this author is writing a yaoi with a supposedly somewhat sympathetic character in the sister so this was just somewhat jarring.