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Yes ! While reading I was like ... lost. There should’ve been more chapters about his middle/high school experience being bullied. I wanted to see more of his bullying experience. It didn’t show much & skipped immediately to him meeting his bully again & screwing him Way toooo fast
right? the pacing is wayyy too fast. we need more details
the pacing is a lil bit fast for me and im kinda confused with their personality (it's only 1 chapter so yeah acceptable)lmao but I like it!