Fix the plot please this really has potential

Kumakuma November 5, 2020 4:48 am

Fix the plot please this really has potential

Responses
    Teiress November 5, 2020 5:11 am

    what's wrong with the plot?

    Sugureta November 5, 2020 5:41 am

    Bahahaha. The plot is indeed kind of topsy turvey.

    But the f*k is fun to watch.

    ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

    Teiress November 5, 2020 6:21 am
    Bahahaha. The plot is indeed kind of topsy turvey.But the f*k is fun to watch.ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ Sugureta

    I...still don't understand?

    Raela November 5, 2020 7:26 am
    I...still don't understand? Teiress

    For me is the lust plot, we could have more bonding father-daughter or mc with the prince, but he must hide to avoid the horny king. I don't know, Vicar is enough for sex plots, but the king is too much for me.

    Teiress November 6, 2020 12:56 am
    For me is the lust plot, we could have more bonding father-daughter or mc with the prince, but he must hide to avoid the horny king. I don't know, Vicar is enough for sex plots, but the king is too much for me... Raela

    oh. so it's fine that the plot is smutty if it's with just one partner (Vicar) but the king is too creepy & suspicious?