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I suggest you continue. Couldn't be more far from what you've described when things will get serious.
Really? I’ll give it another try then, thanks!
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I suggest you continue. Couldn't be more far from what you've described when things will get serious.
Really? I’ll give it another try then, thanks!
I’m only on ch 7 and this is...hmmm kinda cliche and cheesy, which I’m generally okay with but this is sort of at cringe levels. There’s also not much tension and pacing that I usually enjoy, so it comes off more cringey than badass if that makes sense. I think I’ll drop for now