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This could have become a really good longer story. It felt really immensely rushed. Idk if the author rushed it to just make the smut parts, but it was waaaaaaaaay too fast!
The base was there, good, interesting, with probably deep emotional topics from both sides! But nope, way too fast. And the art style is goooood!!!
It would have been better if it was more organized and longer. ╥﹏╥