Also me: owow nevermind he'll learn the joys of giving the d. again, apparently. what even is this?
quite an abrupt ending
like here i am settling in for the long hall and then it's immediately over
Yeah, it felt a bit rushed..
of asshole semes. itd be fine if there was actually any consequence for them being actual scum but...
here's to hoping this seme isn't an asshole all the time, despite him showing he was one from like seven pages in.
I was hoping it wouldn't go straight for the "I'll rape you into loving me," route. I'm out.
Same #－.－)
i started making a whale-like groaning sound and cringing. props, i rarely ever get slapped this hard with secondhand embarrassment.
everyone dies but is miraculously alive. my working theory is they're all immortal aliens.
im not even sad. i saw this coming and i thought it was bullshit then and i think it is now.
this doesnt even count as tragedy to me, the ending was so gratuitously unneccesary that it just stops feeling like the coherent, well-written story it was and more of the author giggling like, "oo, i gotcha!"
or maybe im wrong and she was going for the full cirlce effect; even so, im just not feeling it. the last chapter ruined a pretty awesome story, imo.
I think the alternate ending (chap16) wrecks it. First the word alternate meaning cannon Yeon-Ho is dead and we never know if the person running to him is Jae-Ha cause the face isn't filled in and looks like a teenager to me, so did he go back and die in the place of Jae-Ha? Could have kept a good story going by exploring how they build a relationship with having to get past Jae-Ha's resentment and Yeon-Ho's apathy/cowardice.
True dat
*Chapter 3 happens*
Me: O wow look at all the other things i can read on this site
how you gonna end the chapter right there when im obviously over here dying
rude af