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"ew, this is so toxic!! This is disgusting!! This is rape!!" *Proceed to read it and wait for updates*

I actually like mc, other than his handsome design, his personality is so straightforward. Wdym he’s garbage? He’s direct in his wants and needs from the get go, was never rude to anyone, and was respectful when rejected. Plot-wise, I agree it’s meh, but yall expect every character to be an angel in every story that exist, the hell…

Girl chill theyre homosexuals in love, leave them alone

Girl he's just being a simp, leave him be.

Gurl he's just down bad

Gurl it's fine he's just being silly

At least say that you're sorry too before you fuck him you prick one would've thought communication cost a fortune. Fuckin finally

Dude needs to apologize as well.. I get you were hurt but the garage/warehouse dubcon scene and the fact that you just randomly broke up without a proper explaination

But JJ bitch u better say sorry too later cuz u weren't all right too

Don't get me wrong I'm still glad they made up but DAMN there could not be 2 more incompatible personalities. Not a smidgen of communication until one was literally on the verge of a nervous breakdown???

I still ain't forget how he left Leo on that warehouse floor post-coitus
And thinking about it, isn't it ridiculous? That it took over 4 months for them to talk it out AFTER they broke up?
JJ fr makes me mad lmfao
I'd seriously give his dick the good old one-two grip and twist (off)

I want JJ's pov. I'll never forgive him for how he treated leo without knowing his perspective. Leo did all the work and this conflict. Most of the damage was also on his side just cuz JJ broke up without clear explaination

i’m ready for the dislikes but i’m not satisfied with this. leo apologized but jj didn’t apology for basically SAing leo (i get it was supposed to be consensual but it did not read like that- just made me uncomfortable)

or not being an adult and talking out his problem and just letting it fester inside of him. you see how quickly it was solved when they actually talked? this shit could’ve been over before it even became an issue if jj talked about how he felt…yk how you’re supposed to do when you’re dating someone.

loved the leo was able to admit he was a shitty boyfriend but wish jj was more apologetic for how he treated leo.

It seems that a lot of ppl think that the onus is on Leo to change for the better as though he was the only one who messed up... but like, no, they both hurt each other, the story literally says this. Yeah Leo's problem is that he's self centered, immature, and inconsiderate, and it's not cool that he basically turned his boyfriend into his handler. But the main issue is that JJ cannot communicate his needs in their relationship. Leo literally confronts JJ not once but TWICE and asks wtf JJ had been bottling up all this time and JJ never gives him a direct answer. Like come on man, you can't even be open and honest with your partner of 5 years?

Chapter 1 is basically:
> "Stop saying vague shit or I'm breaking up with you" - Leo
> "Actually, YOU'RE the one getting broken up with" - JJ
> Refuses to elaborate
> Leaves

And then afterwards their interactions mainly consist of JJ refusing to elaborate and then leaving (usually after clapping Leo's cheeks).

Leo is as transparent as glass while JJ isn't just a brick fucking wall, he might as well be the Great Wall of China. JJ built up some years of resentment towards Leo for always having to bail him out yet never communicated this to him, leaving Leo completely unaware that anything was wrong. It's mentioned that they've had fights before, but how many of those fights involved either of them communicating exactly what the other did to hurt them? In their fight in chapter 1, JJ mentions that he's going back to their apartment to pack his things, and that he "already told [Leo] this." The fact that Leo responds with confusion means that JJ probably did just that: he told Leo some time before the story that he was going to pack up his things and leave, but didn't give him a reason why. He was just going to pack up his things and that was that. They never actually TALKED about it.

I suppose JJ's line of reasoning is probably, "I've bailed him out so many times that he should know that I'm fed up with it by now. He should've also noticed that we don't really act much like boyfriends anymore." But Leo doesn't know or notice these things, because he's not a mind reader!! That's why communication is key in a relationship: you should never assume your partner knows how you feel, because chances are that they don't. If you leave a problem unsaid, your partner might not even know it bothered you in the first place!

It's kind of sad, though, because that's how it is in real life. JJ resigned himself to a relationship where he both loves and resents his partner, and once it finally boiled over he had already been mentally checked out for months. They aren't good for each other..... yet I can't help but keep reading

Leo is actually, impulsively brave, and it's so real

THOSE MATCHING TSHIRTS WAS SUCH A CUTE FUCKING MOMENT I CANT DO THIS

''i end up going against my instincts'' bro is the most impulsive guy ever. wdym your instinct was to not kiss him? seems like he's in denial if he thinks fucking/kissing him every time they see each other is rationnal.
this is not some big manipulation game my guy, you're just a sad heartbroken dude, time to drop the stoic attitude.
it pisses me off that he acts all emotionneless and makes leo feel ashamed of himself for actually trying to face his feeling and communicate (even if tbh he's rly self centered while doing so). then he turns around, gives him false hope while being like ''i do that so he leaves me alone''.. no bro you do that cause you want to, stop lying to yourself

J.J. what the fuck? I understand it's not easy to move on from a breakup, much less from someone you've grown to care and love for five whole years. It's five years of feelings you're not supposed to process within a few months (and yes, that's why a lot of people go back with their exes even though either them or their ex were a pos).

You wanted Leo to realise he messed up and have a him give a genuine apology. But the fuck is you with "instincts"? Was your dick the one making the decisions here? Was it your dick keeping you from communicating shit to Leo even though we know he might've ignored you cuz let's be real he's an idiot? Was your dick the one who thought it was a good idea to force yourself onto Leo when he was making the offer of being fuck-buddies???

Now you're just playing with him man. Disgusting. Don't give him and yourself false hopes that your relationship can go to what it was before. Nuh uh. It's strained because of the two of you. It won't go back to the happy memories of you never saying shit that made you uncomfortable or clearly stating boundaries to him (like being more stern in telling Leo he didn't like being filmed or have his face uploaded on Leo's insta, or even just having a time off as a couple) and Leo completely disregarding your wishes, being an egotistical idiot and a narcissist.

I can see already that with the heat of the moment, J.J. and Leo will sleep together, Leo will think everything is okay or at least that J.J. won't go away... Aaaaahhhhhhh fucking hell. Don't think with your dicks, think with your brains!!!


Both aren't good match for eachother as much as this fact will hurt them.

Atp those who complained about Leo still are just hating him lol. You realised the only one between those 2 who has a character development is Leo? Wth do you want him to do? He alrd admitted that he's still in love with JJ and that he wanna make it work between them. That prideful twink knocked down his ego to owning up his mistake and admitted that he was wrong. But did JJ admitted that he too contributed to their relationship falling apart? That he too was in the wrong? That he too never did tryna fix shit before things escalated the way it is. He forced himself onto Leo just cause he's pissed that Leo suggested that they become fuck buddy. And now he forced kissed Leo when Leo is emotionally vulnerable after he literally laid out his feelings. If anything JJ is a dickhead thru and thru. Fuck him (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻

Leo my love you deserve better than a motherfucker who never bothered to communicate with you