The plot and concept is interesting, especially for me who likes these kinda things, but it just really pissed me off that the MC still ended up with the guy who imprisoned and used him as his baby mama.
The art was okay, the Seme's body looked really hot but sometimes the way they drew people looked a little awkward to me.
Especially the kid. Her head would either be too big or her arms were too short, scared the frick out of me when I found out she was only 3. Looked at least like a 5.
Also, I do not approve of the gentle parenting. She keeps throwing a tantrum when they say no and they enable her. I ain't letting it go just because it's a yaoi. It's also because she's not cute for me, at all.
Anyways, the story had a lot of plotholes for me. I know the idea was good, but the delivery was anything but. It's a little too unrealistic to let go of. Especially the part where the Uke ran off and went against some elite people good at fighting and handling things.
A grenade? Are you fricking kidding me? I don't think anyone was supposed to have access to buying that. Also, he bought those things with the Seme's card. Wasn't he supposed to get any notifications for buying stuff like that? Like, to confirm if his card wasn't stolen or anything.
Anyways, all of it sucks. There was a reason why I dropped this story before and I already had a guess while reading the first few chapters again.
Not gonna be reading this again, I'mma leave this comment as a private note to remind myself why I didn't like this story and why I shouldn't be re-reading it.
It was fine. Not my type but it's still fine.
The speech and love confessions at the end was cringey, like, I literally cringed and winced while reading. It's not as good as some idol themed stories I've read, but the concept is somewhat realistic.
I don't really read idol themed or actor themed stories, mostly because the stress from worrying about scandals and reputations turn me off, so don't take my word for it. It's just not my type of story.











3 YEARS I MARINATED THIS. 3 years of perseverance and enduring the tempting urge to throw it all away and just read this. And the meal was more spectacular than I expected.
This is a golden one. Another story that I loved when I read it before and fell more when I read it again. Words just cannot express what a good and beautiful masterpiece this was.
The action scenes weren't even the best out of all its qualities. The comedy and humor are to die for and the plot... The concept... The flow, the storyline... THE DELIVERY! Is just so masterful and perfect! I want more! I NEED MORE!!!!
Anyways, it was just about to get good! I had a feeling I was gonna meet a dead end by the time I reach the latest chapter, but I just couldn't stop myself from indulging into this!
So what? I'm gonna wait another year so I could save enough enough chapters to read all at once? Undeniably.
Will I kill myself during the process? Highly likely.
As long as I get to read more of the action scenes, the MC's adventures, the comedy bits and his trashy mouth.
Oh, what I wouldn't give to read another chapter from the future
I saw this 4 years ago but ignored it since it wasn't interesting enough for me.
I'm kinda happy I stopped reading it cause now there's more chapters