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i LOVE how fleshed out all of the characters are. for smth taht's only 16 chapters, it feels like while i'm still at the beginning of the exposition, i've spent hours reading it. i can confidently say i'm more aware of what all the side characters are doing rn more than i am with the MC, and i'm honestly in love with that. because MC clearly's got his own shit going on, with some deep depression, but you can see the slight shift in how he replies to the guy he did the hand-combat with when asked what his sect is, versus in the beginning when he told his own senior that he had 0 ties to wudang and its name. meanwhile the same senior no longer holds back his fist to wait for his opponent's reply as he once did in earlier chapters when representing wudang, and now accommodating the new martial arts to his representation of wudang. because MC utilizes the old martial arts, such as drunken footwork and traditions of combat, while now, his senior brother is using more pragmatic fighting styles that don't display the same flexibility that traditional martial arts might offer in one's daily life outside of just fighting.