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i'm 4 chapters in WHY THE HELL IS HE SO FREAKYYY like dawg, stop, you're embarrassing meeeeeee

AYO SAVE MY GUY, MY WINE COLORED HAIRED MAN FROM THESE FUCKERS

the uncensored dick surprised the shit out of me

he down bad like that

to be continued?? will there be more chapters??

A VIRGIN THAT KNOWS ABOUT SEXUAL INTERCOURSE AND A VIRGIN THAT JUST HAD A CRASH COURSE LEZZGOO

too many plot holes. cliff's disappearance to the other world, how the original author ended up in the other world alongside with the other "ediths," the knight that was actually the long lost prince of another nation, and etc.

also, i don't like how they first wanted to develop the supposed to be land of killeon only to end up as the duke. i wished they both, edith and killeon to still want to develop that land somehow.

the sudden "love at first sight" scene with the henry and the crown princess was kind of random to be honest. i hope to see some of their scenes in the side story.

and kinda wished they showed more of original edith and original rhyse.

this is the same as "the abused became the abuser" trope, kinda. the kid was tortured mentally; from a very nonchalant dad, also nonchalant mom, early exposure to sexual graphics which had led to him thinking that he wasn't normal as such. and the other part where he learns that he wasn't his dad's bio kid.

also the mom's perspective was kind of valid, considering that she did love him but the dad was more into his self-interests that he ignored mom's sincerity.

and from the dad's side, it was hella of a big ass no. it was clear that he was after the money and fame. but still, he wouldn't been like that crazy in the later chapters if he wasn't pushed that hard mentally. also him having that weird disconnection to the kid is a wild detail that kind of foreshadowing that he wasn't the kid's bio dad.

crazy shit happening but overall it's a good quick read.

what's up with the crown prince?? he keeps on pushing raymond with our mc, like bro. she looks uncomfortable with him and she clearly doesn't like him no more

me after realizing how can kim dokja possess yoo joonghyuk's body without him being the direct sponsor/constellation: ಥ‿ಥ