beta
umm many thoughts. i want to start by saying the good parts; the side chapters were beautiful and the best part of this story. when jaehyeok was on his knees and asked for permission to suck yeonoh off god that was delicious. the most attractive he’s ever been and all bc he was being a service top and a little submissive and getting his hair stroked and getting cum in his face and and yeah. i love service tops and a little submission if u couldn’t tell. the art was gorgeous, there’s no denying that but god the anatomy is what stood out for me. gorgeous backs beautiful legs and amazing torsos. at the beginning the face expressions were so stiff and bland, especially jaehyeok’s, but they got better half way through.
now bad parts; i hated jaehyeok all the way until his “redemption”. dude was so ??? from the beginning. his thinking process, his actions, and everything just threw me off. he was an asshole even though he did tell mc that he wouldn’t “fall” for him. many time she gave