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eh how's uke acting is understandable ngl. but he should learn how to communicate his worries, seme is acting his best man... i feel bad for him. also that ex, what makes him think distancing would work? it didn't work for him then how the hell is he expecting it's gonna work for seme? obviously he has to do something different which is be considerate and continuously loving.

so far it's only seme who has been doing all the work and the pursuing, hope i see something from uke in the future chapters

also i dont think nazuku being a minor is essential to the plot anyways right? author definitely should've just bumped up his age. the "go to my college away from home" issue could very well be solved if they changed it into a job offer instead. idk why the author chose him to be a minor

really would've been a bit better if nazuku was a college student or at least senior highschool (18) if this was irl i definitely would be rooting for the sister and be disappointed she backed down so easily.

it was pretty interesting but kinda messy. but ig that's what the author was going for lol. i prefer it being executed another way though cause the plot def has great potential but what this did was just a messy mash of extreme only porn no plot at times and then some extreme interesting sudden plot drop, no in between i skimmed through the raws of the sequel and uhh i dont think any more of our questions are addressed lol.

i didn't realize this was last updated 2020

sorry but... i get the last chapter's intent and kanata's thoughts were understandable BUT shouldn't that have happened way before chapter 2 happened? kanata was bitching about the same thing kuro's been telling him in chapters 1 and 2. I thought it was all settled because he has shown he wanted it for himself. but somehow it's not just so we could insert this new guy? girl that's literally what kuro's been telling you since the start it's just odd to me how adamant kanata was about doing it with kuro (because he also likes him) and getting hurt because kuro was constantly telling him that he wanted him to choose for himself and it's something he should do with the one he loves but now in chapter 5 he's second guessing? THE ORDER FEELS SO WRONGGGGGG

want more works from this author. all the stories are wholesome

i think people just liked the "ending" because they're a tachibana x ono shipper which is kinda shallow. im surprised only a few ever touched on how it's very sad that chikage is still living on his shadows and is a replacement until the end. it never showed ono being willing to change those feelings for chikage himself but instead him just wanting to bury his feelings for tachibana so he's using chikage as a cover. there was effort, but it was for the wrong reason. it's sad tbh and if it goes on like this i just hope they'd just break it off and find others to love. i know the whole point of this is chikage is the one who tried to understand him the most right now but it's very toxic when ono himself just puts effort into burying the feelings and not loving chikage himself. idk if im making sense but basically i have an issue about ono's prime reason why he goes to chikage.

everyone's worried about cheepers i just hope cheepers isn't dead. like imagine him being sad about maki and then finding out cheepers died in the same day like I can see some sadistic author writing it like that and I hope it wouldn't be like that

and somehow people still manage to forget that the uke himself has had an idealized version of asahi which he only really got to know through interacting with him for business i swear how hard is it to understand that point of information. it's so easy to see how, aside from the business and family pressure, accepting the sudden proposal with the way they don't even know much of each other yet (especially the uke) is a bad idea. yall see it now, he admitted it himself that he knew nothing about him. they weren't ready. yall act like asahi murdered him and forced himself back into uke's life when they literally met again THROUGH WORK.