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I think it’s fine a dandy that they’re getting together I guess. But I would have actually preferred that uke watches seme find his happiness with the omega and then that MC uke would proceed to find a new love through his second chance. This plot would be more symbolic for the uke and also tell an underlying message, learning to let go of things that aren’t met to be and to move on from the past. This would focus way more on MC on a psychological standpoint and would be significantly less dramatic. However, I would’ve liked a plot like that way more because not only does it tell the readers(us) a lesson. It creates a compelling and interesting story of its own that feels more realistic. (〜￣△￣)〜. If you have any opinions to add or take away from my idea of changing the story, please do say as I’m also interested in what others think of the story and it’s could-have-been plot.