Is it just me or the sex scenes too much? Like the heart eyes and the moaning and the drooling, like I get it they’re fucking and shit but damn the moans really gotta be that much and the hearts on the eyes was messing with me a lot. Idk maybe it’s also cuz the bottom it’s really pretty and kinda small compared to the top?
Ik some ppl personally like it like that but idk he was doing the up most with the moaning and shit. Idk just my opinion abt it. The rest okay okay the story was like a 7/10 just cuz for me him drawing him inappropriate ways messed with me a bit and how he kinda reacted when the top just touched him even just a little.
Bro mc he’s annoying like he breaks up with guys if their ducks are huge and only like them with a big dick and handsome face. I don’t like how he went on a date just to get his mind off the top like that’s mad disrespectful 2 the person you went on a date with. Also hate how he went on a date to get his mind off the top but starts wanting him back when noticing he’s not chasing him around anymore and he only misses his dick. I hate when mc act like that. They act like they hate the tops but starts following/thinking abt them once they stop going after them. Over the arts cute I just hate the Mc he needs to make his mind up!!
I hoping there’s no romance and it’s just abt him being an actor, I don’t like her (girl actor brown hair) as a love interest idk there’s nothing wrong with her I js don’t think they fit well together? Idk how to explain it.
I just don’t want romance in this one bc it’s going so well and romance will just ruin it for me. Love everything else abt this especially the mom she my fav cuz in both life’s she was proud of him.
Same sentiment when she came back. I was excited for her to be his acting buddy but the shift in her personality or how their reunion happened isn't doing it for me. (Im honestly glad it's just and end of a chapter and the beginning of the next, so ultimately, it focused on his acting career after that short reunion highlight)
Yeah, I loved that they acted together and gave her some advices. I just want to see friendship building, rather than romance. It be nice to see them act again but I hope if they ever do, they don't catch hard feelings while acting. Doesn't seem like the right time. She's a nice girl though and I would love if they were best friends first because I feel like their romance should bud SLOWLY in another time since he seems the type who focus on acting and put that as his priority.
I can’t it’s so weird, like idc if u continue to read it but like wtf they fucked while both of their dads are together. Also I don’t feel bad for the top just bc the bottom likes him for his dick if u think abt it he only fell for him bc of his looks and how he looks like MC dad. And the dads are always fucking like wtf so weird. Like MC said he happy for his dad but ended up fucking his bf kid WTF. Idk people like this but wtv if u like shit like this go for it ig
Spoilers for ppl wondering don’t get mad at me if u see this!
Basically FL has a great fire spirit that’s dormant but eventually appears later on, also the father looses his spirit for harming his daughter I think it the fire king the one the dad had a contact with not 100% sure tho. The prince (the ex fiancé) is incompetent so he tells fl to lower herself to make him seem great compared to her & villainess (chick with pigtails)is a pawn to him he has no feelings to her. All around the ex finance is a complete ASS so r fl parents.
I already know this shit gonna be MESSY, bottom probably meets him Top gets mad leave him the bottom cry,wines ect begging for him back and feeling like shit! I don’t understand how you’re gonna like someone but pretend to be someone else wtf? I already know the bottom gonna fall deep in love and expect top to still love him regardless of the lies.
The bottom seems stupid asf like honestly should’ve told him the truth for the start. I dislike how the friend gave out his number but he kept the CONVERSATIONS going wtf. He should’ve just said wrong number or block him, now it’s gonna get messy and both of them will be hurt and for WHAT js bc u felt like playing with someone? I like how it’s gonna be alpha x alpha tho.
I dropped it after ch 20 maybe or higher idk lost my chapter but I can’t with who the ML is and the FL. He wants 2 kiss her when he’s 20-21 and she’s 15 no. Also I find it hella weird she fell for him when he was like 14 (or younger)and she was mentally older. She even said so that she’s older (when ppl make tease her she often used that line in her thoughts ), Either way one of the is a pedo in a way. Her for liking someone younger when she clearly mentally older and the fact she fell him so fast is mad weird. Him for the age gap wtf. Also when they met clearly she fell in “love “ as soon as she saw him js cause of his looks wtf
Overall it could’ve been good but at the same time Idfk who she would’ve dated I still would feel weird abt the whole thing, maybe if she was 20 or older and he was older too so it wouldn’t be as bad but Idfk.
Lol I’m just trying to ignore. It gets a bit worse when you realize she’s ONLY mentally and physically 15, since leocardia children mature faster than normal. If she’s had theee birthdays since becoming an official family member(she was 8 at the time) that would mean she’s actually only 11. Rel was 15 when she was 8, so now he’s 18. So counting real age, without the whole maturing faster thing. The relationship is between an 18 and 11 year old.
So yikes lol.
I’m just pretending she’s actually 15 and he’s 18 so it’s a BIT less weird(still weird tho lol)











The Top is just never honest lol he can’t just say what he’s feeling or wtv nooo he just has to do a bet or a game so that our ML doesn’t cut him off. He doesn’t wanna be with him but at the same time he can’t be away from him. Even the thought of someone else having him kills him. Which honestly I hope someone does come along even if our ML doesn’t get with him in the end I just want him to feel half of the pain our ML did, when he thought the top doesn’t love him. Which lets be honest he does, he just sucks ass and is a asshole