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Darwin says otherwise.

?? didn’t understand

Mdr because i said « évolution » ? You don’t use this word in english ?

Sorry, sorry I was not poking fun at your use of English. It didn't even occur to me. 'progression' would probably be more accurate a word for what you wanted to express but I knew what you meant and I was disagreeing with you with my own weird humor--using 'evolution' as a pun to retort.

Anyway, look at the story so far...we were introduced to the college students and their attempts to start their own company making the best use of their talent. Then we have our MC who feels somewhat unworthy as a part of the team because he doesn't know how he can contribute. He gets stuck presenting to a potential client and screws it up epically. He feels bad having let his team down after they worked so hard on the game development and does his best to make up for it...next thing we know we're introduced to this seemingly hard ass businessman who is being dumped by his sex friend/lover. Both these MCs are at their lowest points...somehow they end up having sex. For Kang it's more like stress relief and frustration and for Yiyoung, it's a desperate attempt to get him to just look at his team's presentation. Of course Yiyoung is also really attracted to Kang and surprisingly Kang gives him his first prostate orgasm during sex with bully play. They both try to forget that night and move on. Out of sheer curiosity Kang looks at the presentation and it's good. Yiyoung's team gets the contract and a bonus--an office on site. Oh but the 'office' is just a dirty storeroom. They try to make the most of it. The marketing director throws them a bone or two and Yiyoung ends up running errands to stay on this guy's good side. The college students are young, inexperienced and have never been exposed to corporate life. Yiyoung has yet to learn how badly he is being used by the marketing guy. Now it looks like Kang is going to get a chance to see it all. Meanwhile Yiyoung is struggling with his feelings and attraction toward Kang who he feels looks down on him.

Whew! That is quite a lot of progression on the story. Character introductions--check; character development and back stories--in process; smut+ imagined smut to keep fujoshis happy--check! Good artwork--check; Humor in all the right places?--check. The story is moving at a great pace. All this went down in 19 chapters! If anything I want things to slow down. I don't want it to end too soon.

Wrong word. Most likely, you meant to say “development” instead. And I disagree the plot is definitely moving at a good pace.

i didn’t sentence my thinking well. When I said that, I wanted to say that there is not a lot of interaction between the mcs in a good or bad way. Of course there is progression in the story but I was feeling they are « distant » Kang didn’t say anything when one of the team dumped into him. I know he is a busy man and that Yiyoung has his own struggles with the project and his feelings but idk I just wanted more dialogues between them.
Or maybe I just want things to happen quickly loll :///

yeah it was that word I forgot how to say in English (even in French because we use the same word lol)

Like I said to Afroluv I was just thinking that there’s not a lot of interactions btw the mcs, I didn’t say it well lol my bad

I laughed my fucking ass off thank you

LMFAO GOOd jOKE