I know this is supposed to be a shorter story, but it would've been much more intense and intriguing to see both the MC and the ML try and hide their secondary genders from everyone and one another a little longer and have this gradual reveal of who they are as their attraction to each other due to their secondary genders emerges, and more and more subtle, yet dangerous symptoms arise, until it gets more and more difficult for them to hide... Imagine how sexy that would be.
Can little faucet stop fucking crying for one god damn second. The author draws him in a way that it looks like he's in pain all the time and doesn't enjoy it (at the beginning , fair, but EVERY. SINGLE. TIME), it's EXHAUSTING. I'd dump his ass cause what do you mean you're crying with the expression of a Victorian child that discovered Taylor Swifts carbon emissions while the working class gets taxed and has to drink out of paper straws, while having consensual, vanilla sex and aren't enjoying my big cock?!
FUCK, this manhwa is like a toxic relationship - I expect, just for a moment, that maybe a good scene or situation will come up, that any of the characters will show any development... But nope. Expectations too high for this bs.
Great concept over all, hot af, but I wish the second couple explored a dynamic different than the main couple. Otherwise, this is a lil gem of an omegaverse, and I like how the main alpha doesn't want a submissive, small, timid omega. They're such a power couple!
Fuck the uncle, he's a piece of diarrhea left inside a car in the hot sun.
Wait wait, this did NOT just end when Haru got a super intense heat with wetness dripping down his legs, WHYYY would they not draw that super hot sex scene?? This is too short, literally we only got to see them come together, and that's it. Basically unfinished. What a shame, the story is too good to be this short
Rereading this because it's a masterpiece that has a special place in my heart
The art style improvement towards chapters 60+, tho, wow. That sex scene was actually good.
So basically, a recessive alpha wants to be loved for who he is, not what he does and has attachment issues because of it; a dominant alpha wants to be loved for who he is, not the expectations projected onto him (by Dylan), so he kinda has attachment issues, too. I say they match their (mental) freak.
The flashbacks got annoying at times, but they fill in the story and create a red string for readers to follow the evolution of their relationship, so whatever, I see the purpose.
The sex scenes are surprisingly sterile, I don't feel much of the passion during sex, which both of them display otherwise in their intense interactions. I guess the art style is partially to blame. Sometimes, the anatomy is wonky af, too.
This could've been great, actually. The dialogue was on point, although a bit dragged at times. They main characters are pretty, especially Colton, but the eroticism and intensity wasn't there in their physical /sexual interactions. What a shame.
Dajeong hadles Haneu's attachment issues so well! What a green flag. A refreshing read for sure
The omega experience is the female experience down to a t not just because of all the rape, omegas being looked down on and underestimated, and the 'your pheromones provoked him to rape you', but because 'the omega life is still a mystery' regarding omega physical symptoms said by a doctor sums up the approach to the female body in (medical) science.