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very similar plot to others but I eat it up anyway bc I'm a sucker for this genre.
I kind of want him to openly be a "villain" once he gains more power. I think it'd be interesting if he welcomed the title lol it's a bit fast paced but as the author it makes sense he's moving fast since he literally knows everything and what would be advantageous to him. Him being super OP right off the bat is kind of unsatisfying, feels like he didn't struggle enough. The only thing keeping him a lil humble is his mana sensitivity.
He's all business rn, no personal connections and tbh it's kinda nice. Ofc he'll need supporters later so I hope Mercenary lady becomes a strong comrade, as well as those being labeled "terrorists", like i just want him to go around collecting fellow "villains". Also it's almost inevitable a FL is introduced so I just hope she's strong and independent