but seriously? adorable! this was such a good read. the progression was cute and i love their relationship. i love that they tease each other and aren't completely perfect. and the end? LMFAO "do you want kids?" "yes" then he just "ill go hunting" HAHAHHAA imagine just being swooped by a 30 year old man
you are all so mad about a plot? seriously? go re-read the story! Stuff is going to happen just shut up and wait you impatient children. literally them having sex is leading to feelings. literally he JUST SAID he doesn't know how to feel because he's thinking on it too much. there's not a lot beyond that currently, because their situation will not change until they realize they have feelings. why would it? jeez. I can't believe the author gives us this beautiful scene and suddenly people are batshit crazy about 'nO pLOt,' seriously.
you are all so mad about a plot? seriously? go re-read the story! Stuff is going to happen just shut up and wait you impatient children. literally them having sex is leading to feelings. literally he JUST SAID he doesn't know how to feel because he's thinking on it too much. there's not a lot beyond that currently, because their situation will not change until they realize they have feelings. why would it? jeez. I can't believe the author gives us this beautiful scene and suddenly people are batshit crazy about 'nO pLOt'
BUT- I (hope) think that this is all going to blow over extremely fast. I think he'll stay friends with this tribe but prove himself and decline her hand in marriage (my man must be asexual or extremely driven, because he doesn't really care to see her outside of a friend, or comrade, which is fine) but also, other topic, I'm so glad they are addressing the fact that he needs a dream, and motivation. His egg not hatching is almost the representation of his potential that is directed in not the wrong place but it more shows where he could be directing it. He could be so incredibly strong and help so many people with the right dream (along with his revenge). I'm excited for where this will go but please don't let romance get in the way! I'm giving this story the benefit of the doubt










there was so many messed up things in this story im not even sure where to start. but, it had more of a plot than other stories ive seen. that alone was impressive but, not incredibly so.