I love the contrast in the beginning of him hating his neighbor (and not knowing who he was) to completely adapting to momo. like he got headphones, earplugs, and gained resistance to his crude way of speaking. at the end, he completely busted into his neighbors room (while momo was only wearing a shirt) proudly declared his book was being published, and sat down in their living room. Like fr. and the last smile we see of the neighbor? priceless. he's so adorable. he deserves his own story and the author deserves so much praise for making the characters feel so real, and each one so well developed.
this story has such a real feel that is hard to get. my appreciation for it has gone through the roof. I read this probably years ago, but for some reason (although my memory is SHOT) i can still remember this titles name, and i get this warm fuzzy feeling in my chest when thinking of this. will continue to re-read this.
everyone is like 'well the alpha is a little unlikable' like ??? obvious hes raping a CHILD. A CHILD. and then above all he really isn't treating him well. what the hell does "it's my turn to feel good" mean? and then says "You aren't special"? BOY WALK OVER HERE SO I CAN SMACK YOU ACROSS THE FACE BECAUSE THAT CHILD ISN'T YOUR SLAVE.
the beginning looked really good.
the introduction of the childhood friend not believing in him looked good, but it looks like he's going to make up with her later. lame.
I also don't understand... so this young girl is in his class? I understand she is strong but she seems far to weak to be in the same class. I hate when they introduce characters that aren't actually competent. He shouldn't have to take care of her.
also he shouldn't be shipped with ANYONE at this point. the childhood friend or the young girl.
and, this story is becoming increasingly hard to follow. They introduce way to many people, don't make them memorable, and then make them important. stories like these often have the "i hate commoners!" and then that's it. that's their entire character explained. it's disgusting.
At least in "A Returners Magic Should Be Special" one of the young nobles hates commoners for seemingly no reason at the beginning, but then shows that both his parents were killed in a commoner uprising (after they were subjected to unfair treatment) but in his eyes, they were just gross commoner rats that killed his parents. He has a reason.
anyways, this looked good. but somewhere along the line it gets confusing, and i wish i got to see when the main character learned all this and got more powerful. he seems to be 'naturally' gifted but that doesn't explain everything else. I hope it gets cleared up, or i will probably never read this again.
she will probably die because she didn't participate anyway. same with the guy that chose the white door. (blue people i think will be alright) but i think, if the wound was deep enough and there are more people (10 like they should have had), sending wounded out of town would be a smart choice so they can heal and then go back to the center in a few days. but, they also aren't fighting. they aren't getting stronger. the likelihood of her surviving whatever comes after this is minimal compared to the guy who was on the same level as her but decided to fight through his injuries.










this has good potential. let us hope that it stays like this and does not get super confusing. high hopes