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Um.. art's pretty but plot and characters are quite shallow tbh (￣∇￣")
it looks like the author's trying so hard to add gag value and "cool" factors that it actually ended up screwing the story logic sideways unfortunately. not to mention the timing and execution of these details is um. i just dont think they're rlly achieving what they're intended for (i.e. making us laugh or swoon over ml for example) iykwim the tropes for ml specifically (puppy dog + yandere???) are so exaggerated and yet underdeveloped at the same time that it's no longer let him cook, it's burnt and also still raw yikes. mc too is a weird mixture of traits that dont rlly mesh that well so. not very yummy, not very demure, would not recommend
Overall, mc and ml's course of action is all over the place and poorly justified, the writing is pretty stilted and the pacing of everything makes the plot development feel very contrived :( to put it simply a lot of it just wouldn't hold up under scrutiny sigh