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???? you're HEALTHY AND IN GOOD SHAPE, why was that scene so clunky??? YOU yourself can make runes when it's fun and games but when actual fighting comes you're hella ass?? IT'S A HIGH PRESSURE TIME BUT YOU'RE HERE CONTEMPLATING WHETHER OR NOT YOU'LL BE A BROTHER FOR THE KID??? WHAT. i thought you said that you were strong??? why did you perform well in fights that isn't as reliant on you winning but when you're facing someone YOU'VE BEEN WARNED ABT BTW?? YOU'RE SO LOST AND SLOW???
i get that this is supposed to be an emotional scene and stuff but it genuinely infuriates me when a character WHO'S BEEN HIGHLY COMMENDABLE, reacts slowly and illogically when it's pretty easy to think how to act BECAUSE AGAIN, THEY WERE BOTH WARNED ABT SAM.
(i love the story guys, this is a genuine confusion)