Frosche79
: Up to the point of the timeskip, the story was doing great. Flawless, even. The story made sense, the pacing was perfect, and it wasn't confusing at all. But then they decided it would be best for her to have a coma for five years. Understand that? FIVE YEARS, not just 3. Five. Then everything just became a blur.
She stopped hanging out with her father, which us upsetting, btw, because I enjoyed the father-daughter bonding. Then it wasn't her family that explained what happened for the past 5 years. It was the prince and his fiancee (her friends) that did and it honestly didn't give any impact on everything they told her.
It's also curious that her tutor, the villainous hybrid collecting maniac, didn't make any moves while she was a sleep and only did once she woke up.
Everything just felt so rushed. Even her reunion with Lucilian was very lacking. They never hugged and there were no tears. Even though the kid practically sacrificed his blood, sweat, and tears to make these holy stones for her. It was so frustrating to watch this story fall down from grace. I seriously expected it to be good, everything was almost perfect until that dreaded timeskip changed the flow of the story and ruined it for me.
It pains me to say, but this one just broke my heart. I can only hope that in the later chapters they would fix this. I think it's already too late for me as I've already given up on the story, but I hope it's not too late for the other readers who would continue reading it.
Buhbye.
ChezSoi
: I bet with you the mother read Mary Wollstonecraft at least once. (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Feeds
She stopped hanging out with her father, which us upsetting, btw, because I enjoyed the father-daughter bonding. Then it wasn't her family that explained what happened for the past 5 years. It was the prince and his fiancee (her friends) that did and it honestly didn't give any impact on everything they told her.
It's also curious that her tutor, the villainous hybrid collecting maniac, didn't make any moves while she was a sleep and only did once she woke up.
Everything just felt so rushed. Even her reunion with Lucilian was very lacking. They never hugged and there were no tears. Even though the kid practically sacrificed his blood, sweat, and tears to make these holy stones for her. It was so frustrating to watch this story fall down from grace. I seriously expected it to be good, everything was almost perfect until that dreaded timeskip changed the flow of the story and ruined it for me.
It pains me to say, but this one just broke my heart. I can only hope that in the later chapters they would fix this. I think it's already too late for me as I've already given up on the story, but I hope it's not too late for the other readers who would continue reading it.
Buhbye.