Comments & Queries 4

Good story, yk, if the MC weren't looking for Theo for OVER 3 CHAPS already when they're under the same roof. I'm irritated now. MIMS.

Wow, I have a headache. Hated this MC from the get-go. How can you get angry repeatedly, then be annoyed the same things happen at your outbursts each time? How do you accidentally throw a book in a tantrum and make someone bleed and then say you're a doormat in the same breath? Author, you okay? MC flops around sm; growing a spine might help w/ posture, prsnlty and consistent characterisation, too. MC is a loud, cowardly, annoying, nonsensical, frustrating, useless idiot. MIMS. I give up.

Ngl, the scenes are getting jumpy and all over the place, I'm not sure there is an actual plotline here and I feel they're milking this real hard cause at 50's and 60's, I'm already quite a bit bored. I can't imagine them doing anything in all those chaps to make it over 100. Spare me.