beta
cant even root? route? whateva for this hoe
poor little brother
story meant for kids aged 6-12. Author doesn't want to build any story so they just tell plot points out of nowhere in exposition. full chapter about the crown prince's secret home life in the first 20 chapters. lines like "omg is that the [ magic item or construct] that [detailed explanation] and only [ major character trait] can use????" then the author is so lazy they just give the mc everything. why is she the duke at age 16?? why is there flirting scenes between a 8 n 12yo??
half asses conflict, fl recovers from abuse in 15 chapters, is supposedly like 30 in her old world but still acts 8yo reincarnated. also the reincarnation plot is useless??? from the beginning nothing is as she wrote it so why not just have her be a regular child
stop writing baby talk "give mwe chiwd suppowt" ill shoot myself
sadass ending omfg
dont care bout the gay tension but i do care that its a childs body
boring i think
too damn fast and I feel like the plot was over in 20 chapters cause she kicked out the villain in the title mad quick
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