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10/10
Cute! Would love it even more if not for the incest. I understand they aren't blood-related, but the age gap is creepy.
6/10
Personally, I dropped the story. But I still love the main character's family. I wish they dropped the incest bits, I don't remember ever telling my family I wanted to marry them. The main character was the real problem. She just didn't have any appeal, anyone who didn't like her was the most evil person in existence. If she wasn't such a Mary Sue I would have read the story front to back in a heart beat.
9/10
Sweet. A story with vampires that isn't twilight is always a win for me. Cute a fluffy, however, it does not shy away from the forever-living aspect of the main love interest. Tries to be sad, but it's not it.
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