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4
Dramatic. The ML jumps to like 737392 conclusions in a span of like five minutes.
I RLLY enjoyed the FL's interaction with the daughter though<3
5
Action packed.
Plot is not that visible tbh but I think that with more chapters, it would become clear what the storyline is. I like that, it's not very predictable which can be boring but at the same time not so unpredictable that you get a whiplash like 10 times per chapter.
Can't tell who the FL is. Honestly kinda hope that it doesn't turn into one of those annoying stories where it turns very romance-centric like in the middle of the story.
2
Was interesting at first but I got bored of their attitudes real fast
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