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????!!!! UH? I THINK SO ?! this is like. the stereotypical HS bullying revenge plot carried out by the new, insanely strong transfer student while MC is typical bullied loser, EXCEPT this is an all-girl's school and bro the girls are probably gay for each other ?
nah this is actually so good. like i love how all the characters are introduced so far, and we're not just given an exposition dump of everything including the MC all at once. also i LOVE mc. he's so cool and honestly, i LOVE those hyper, foolish and fuck-around delinquents, but i also love how MC is like, that stereotypical "slow brute' sidekick who's actually not that slow and is very loyal.
it's the stereotypical plotline of "group of outcasts who don't agree with violence but use the system to take down itself." dude's a loser and knows it and ig as long as you know urself that's all that matters <3
tbh the plot isn't all fighting, but the amount of violence that is necessary for it to exist is enough to make a blockbuster American movie.
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