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It seems promising, my only little irks is that inconsistency in the MC’s proportions and the plot point of using a ‘zombie virus’ for the earths downfall. Although it’s not a big deal I personally feel like the ‘zombie virus apocalypse’ troupe shouldn’t coexist with monster/portal/system stories when monsters are literally already the downfall of humanity? So then what’s the whole deal with the zombie virus? But still early stages so we’ll see
I’ve actually been avoiding this because I thought the MC was a female and not that it can’t be a FL MC it’s the fact that most authors aren’t just bad at doing a good FL love interest they also suck at doing a good FL MC in a murim/cultivation story. Anyways I think this is really good but I personally think there’s still a lot of loose ends that I’d be hoping to see in season 3 being tied up. Mainly more backstory on how he obtained his powers since they never explained it properly
I think the way they’ve set out the MC is quite creative and a real fine line that they are JUST balancing. MC is assimilated as his game character but I feel like he doesn’t have any control at all and ‘Grandfell’ is the main body while he’s just like a separate personality on the side despite them being one person. The story is essentially also a one man show with some groups that he saved being his subordinates from time to time. Despite that, the story is quite interesting and I’d recommend
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