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Ending felt ridiculously rushed. It’s messed up that the twin, the guy who organized the gang r*pe and everyone who participated in it got away with no consequences. MC is strong and fun to watch but I hate how weak he is. ML is toxic and always a few steps ahead but even he didn’t do his part right. There’s some serious crimes here that just get addressed. It’s rushed and boring in the middle. You don’t het many moments of romance either. Just obsession.
This whole story is like an excuse for this age gap to exist without the grooming allegations “bc mentally MC is 21” but both past and future MC was TOO YOUNG. Like why does this story exist? The brother is so creepy and MC is so naive. After time reset, MC is a 5th grader while ML is 28 YEARS OLD. Before time reset, MC was 21 yo with an even older ML. Age gaps are fine when it’s between adults(after 25 yo) bc their brains are fully developed and they have some life experiences.
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