• ughh

C10

the ml is nice and his personality is likeable, but the fl is not hsjhd she's just annoying. also, mtl frustrates me

C6

the fuck is this THE FLOW IS SHIT AND NEW INFO ARE ADDED OUT OF NOWHERE IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE. THE ML HIDING HIS FACE DOESNT MAKE SENSE EVEN WITH THAT SNAKE APPEARANCE EXPLANATION EITHER?? HE ALREADY SHOWED HIS FACE AS A COMMANDER AND THERE ARE NO NEGATIVE REACTIONS FROM THE FL WHAT'S HOLDING HIM BACK ALSO, THAT FEVER SHIT WAS SO RIDICULOUS HSJDH SHE REACHED THE GARDEN PERFECTLY FINE THEN PASSES OUT AFTER GETTING TOLD SHE HAS A FEVER. MY GUY

one of the worst reads. wth

C10

not for me hdjdh

C59

not for me

C2

flow and storytelling sucks.

C2

plot holes. also, wtf is that flow. nope. not for me

C20.5

the plot is frustrating just as much as the mtl

C2

dont like the plot and progression

C40.5

plot is just annoying, no other substance whatsoever. it doesnt even make sense how the fl's always opressed when she's dubbed 'smart' and obviously has the upperhand. mtl as well