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So lame. The story had some promise but it's beyond down the drain, by now. Also, if you don't know how to write girls, don't write so many of them into your story. It makes a bad story even worse.
I think I had really loved this when I started, but then it started feeling really greasy, slimey, annoying and kinda stupid. I lost interest and couldn't find it in me to continue.
Holy trash. I need someone to heal ME after attempting to read this.
Very sweet. Loved this a lot. May be anticlimactic a bit, but the police nor mother searched for a son taking the blame for a crime he didn't commit. I hope nothing but the worst for people like y'all. Nothing but the best for these cuties though. Hope MC's able to cope w/ his oncoming blindness better w/ ML by his side. SN: Lao Mao(?) needs a psych eval, stat. Cheating loony acting like a pitiful child. Abandoned LeLe, started screwing randos, calling them ALL his LeLe? Ik crazy when I see it.
Bro, my fave CP ended up being psycho blondie and Jiha. They not even together and I still hate blondie, but they still became my fave, lol. The others were kinda boring and bland. I agree w/ Jiha that a little obsessive is the best. I STILL DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY MC'S BRO WAS GIVING MC CRAP STRAIGHT TILL THE END. Like abusive father, like abusive son, Ig?
Love triangle is pukeworthy, ML is indecisive condescending scum, MC is a cringy Mary Sue goldfish and get stars in her eyes when she and the people she loves are repeatedly treated like crap by said ML, and the adults are unreliable and make my idiot allergy act up. Even though the Murim Alliance is truly heinous and despicable, I'm rooting for them just cause they seem to have functioning braincells, are less cringy and pathetic, and don't run on overhydrated flowers in the brain.
No where as good or thrilling as I remember the novel to be, but still addictive to read.
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