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@22
A story of an older sis who pretends to care for the younger sis but is actually pimping out the younger sis to a man 2x younger sis' age so they both live a peaceful wealthy life. Amen. That's what this story is cause MC is from modern times. Tell me how that age gap ain't the 1st thing she wanna throw out a window? MC is SICK. I wanted to continue reading to see how she realises how sick and disgusting she is, but it's 80+ chaps in, and the comments still singing my same tune, so not I.
@73
I'm glad MC's starting to feel like she has a home, fam+love, but that's just Vera+Grandpa. From D1, Charente treated her as an outsider and I can see he still does, though he's being kind out of guilt. He used MC to make himself look good in front of his ex w/o thinking once about how MC would feel. Be like "crack open her head". How bout grow some human decency instead. MC will always be an outsider in his fam of 3. He'll never truly care about her. MC's satisfied w/ too little. It's sad.
@16
It's been ages since I last read this, so Idk what it's about. I think I may have been bored reading it, but what I DO know, is that I'm never returning to it. DNF.
@30[Asura]
That OOC mission mess-up by MC made no sense and was inexcusable. Idk what the author was thinking, if it needed tension, loss, weakness and trauma as a reason to insert char dev or what, but it was poorly done and I remember being enraged. I haven't touched this in years and prob never will again. DNF. Bye, cutie Kuro (which is lazy, borderline offensive naming, author).
@77.5
All I remember was MC getting hella cringy and annoying this particular chap, that I ran out of sheer 2nd hand embarrassment. The story was also, imo, getting hella boring. Idt I'll ever really reach for this again. DNF.
@51
Everyone's all, 'MC's so mature!' but I'll say it again: just cause the author says it or makes other char's say it, doesn't make it so. MC is childish, idiotic, braindead and good for nothing. How is she not dead yet from her sheer stupidity? Also, she must be a raging alcoholic. Beer is mentioned every other chap. She keeps making the same childish impulsive mistakes and author thinks that's comedy. Let's not even mention that the plot is non-existent and nothing is happening at all. DNF.
@124[Asura]
MC is increasingly more annoying and pathetic in my eyes. He literally killing this story for me so I'm out. I also hate the Saintess, who has weak mentality, no personality and is the extremely weak, need-to-be-saved, damsel in distress type. Ew. The romance is whack and the action scenes were just giving me the impression they were weak ants and I want them to lose. Go, Lich! Plus, MC's 'OP plans' killed thousands of people. I ain't forget that. Bye.
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