beta
@36[Asura]
Got very stupid and very boring, very fast. Idk where this is going but I can literally feel time and my braincells burning reading this, so Irdc.
@24[Asura]
Stopped reading when this felt like it was more about the Heavenly Demon than the Heavenly Demon's Descendant. I ain't here to watch someone catch a free ride w/ no growth potential.
@48[Asura]
Got boring and directionless.
@40[Asura]
All I had were complaints for this, lol.
@70[Asura]
All I really remember is the bite-sized chaps w/ barely anything happening that take forever to come out, ensuring that I will totally forget everything I've read and be completely lost if I leave it to accumulate. I also remember MC getting insulted, walked all over and accepting it and then saving everyone thanklessly??? Like this story wasn't already pointless enough w/ the first point?
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