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@32[Asura]
Ew, lol. The girls are either stupid, incompetent, rude or disgusting. Love it when authors hate girls but love gigantic unrealistic busts. Slavery, how fun. Boy, just take the L. Your 2nd life looking worse than the 1st. Bye.
@17[Asura]
"Even if I'm a 7th class mage, I'm still your son." 'Ell. That's right. Even if he's 7th class, he's still my son.' No, no. That's def not your son. He suddenly became an ogre after becoming 7th class. What did you THINK he was, Ma'am? A genetic mutation? This dialogue. Cringe. It's really very bad. My poor IQ. My poor blood pressure. How do you get more stupid and ridiculous than this? Does MC have a surname? What is the pt. of this? Storytelling and pacing are also rubbish.
@03[Asura]
To that one person who said Asura never translates trash, lol.
@20[Asura]
MC's beyond useless, esp when it actually matters. He's willfully stupid and arrogant, not just ignorant. Also, the implication that MC murdered his niece and/or others, had me checking outttt. Hahaha, nope. I heard he made these char's to mimic the people he loved. His char is a blood knight that has lapses in judgement, anger issues and murderous tendencies, which could reflect real life, the way the other char's mimic his other loved ones irl (who he may/may not have killed?). Wth.
@47
DERANGED. Idk if anyone else is seeing how looney toons this MC is, but I sure am, and her looney toons mentality is making all other char's act looney toons too, and it's not even psychological genre, which leads me to believe that the author thinks that this story is sane, which means the author is just as looney toons. I'm out.
@54[Asura]
It feels very up in the air and directionless. I'm quite thoroughly bored w/ the plot for a while now and I'm so confused as to what the author is planning. He's a doctor, a saint, a swordsman, a magician, a teacher, a hero. This is all over the place, sm is happening and it's not a good thing. There's nothing tethering me here honestly, so I'm out.
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